As soon as I stepped out of our car
and looked up at the big house, I knew it was going to be a good day. We rung
the bell and all I could hear was the loud sound of ‘Ding-Dong.’ About thirty
seconds later I could hear the sound of footsteps on hardwood. The door opened
and a man appeared and said, “Welcome.”
My father, Andrew and I drove all the
way to Utah to see my father’s grandparents. We saw them and went to a cook out
at another relative’s house. The man was very tall and skinny with some gray
hair and a nice little jacket that had a plaid pattern on it. When I stepped inside I saw a huge living
room, with a small fish tank on a table next to some stairs. On the carpet, in the middle of living room,
I saw some toy trains, probably for some of my littler cousins. The man told my
brother, Andrew, and me that there were about three stories to this house. I
thought to myself, “I wonder if their basement was old and creepy, with dirt
floors and small rooms.” I knew it wouldn’t be like that, since it was a very
nice house, from the look of it. He didn’t tell us about the basement, he just
lead us to it. As we walked to the basement door and looked around in
excitement, everything looked so new and nice.
A few seconds later we arrived at the
basement door, before he even opened it, I could hear excited voices and
footsteps clicking on the floor. After the door was open, I looked on into the
vast darkness that seemed to swallow the stairs. The man went first, then my
father, then me, and lastly my brother. As
I held onto the rail, my eyes were adjusting to the darkness that seemed to never
end. When I got to the bottom of the stairs, I stepped onto some more soft and
fluffy carpet, the voices and footsteps were coming from some smaller kids
playing arcade games. The room was bigger than it appeared, At the farthest
corner was a window about five feet high, light crawled into the dark room.
Next to the window was a jar, and it was full of candy! I rushed over to it and
got a handful. I ate some and said, “Skittles, I love Skittles!” The man next
to my father said, “Don’t eat too much now, we are cooking up dinner.” I nodded
and told him that I would only have my handful. He said all right, and then he
left, so did my father. I was so ecstatic, that as soon as I heard the basement
door close, I started to run around. I ran so frantically I dropped some of my
Skittles.
After I had played a few games and eaten my Skittles.
I started up the stairs, and when I opened it, light hit my face. My eyes were
so adjusted to the darkness in the basement, that when I came up from the void,
my eyes started to burn. I climbed the last step and looked around, rubbing my
eyes. The first thing I noticed was a big kitchen, and next to it, a screen
door. I walked up to the door, and heard more voices, but this time they
weren’t as excited as the ones in the basement. I opened the door and stepped
outside on to the porch. The wood was a light brown and there were many people.
I looked out into the yard and saw a pool. I love to swim so I was very
excited. I walked down the stairs, and looked beyond the pool. I saw a
trampoline, but it looked different, I didn’t see the steel legs that usually
held a trampoline up, all I saw was the bouncy part. I ran up to it and saw
that it was on a big hole. “It’s in a hole?” I exclaimed excitedly. I jumped on
it and lost my balance. I fell backwards and landed softly. The sun warmed me
as I lay there. I got up and ran to a big lump, of dirt and grass, and stood on
it and looked on to the house full of people. I rolled down the hill and ran
back to the house. I put my feet into the pool water and watched people cook
dinner for all my family. Looking back on this experience that no person is
alike, you don’t need to be young to have fun, but you don’t have to be rich to
be cool or remembered.

The story was very enticing
ReplyDelete-Stephen Fitzgerald
Wow that was really cool! It seemed like you had a very fun time!
ReplyDelete-Emma Coe
Wow that was really cool! It seemed like you had a very fun time!
ReplyDelete-Emma Coe
I'd probably do that today if I had the chance.
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